I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Today in literacy we did a independent activity it was a letter to the prime minister it was about at school to get free lunches i think it would be a good idea because if you run out or didn't bring any lunch to school you still can eat something.
hi Noah its me Lucas from south hornby i really think that the priminster should give out free lunches. maybe next time you could make it your letter longer.
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hi Noah its me Lucas from south hornby i really think that the priminster should give out free lunches. maybe next time you could make it your letter longer.
ReplyDeleteHey Noah
ReplyDeleteI like your letter and I agrey with you because once i didnt bring my lunch and i had no food all day.
Good letter and good work keep it up.