hi readers. today we finished our story about a jet plane.we took picture prompt and pictured that we were on the wing of the plane. i enjoyed writing the story. what i found challenging was thinking of ideas.
I am on my diamond jet.I take a nape and i wake up on the wing off the jet.And i was terrified when i looked down i was high in the sky then i looked up and saw a beautiful sun set.The i took a nape and wook back up in the jet and i thought it was in real life.
The end by Noah
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