I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
This week in writing we wrote a six sentence story about creating a character and adding deatail.Our focus was on creating sentences.We learnt that the four criteria of a sentence.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
noah your work is real cool i love the yub yubs
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hi noah good job in your work relly love it and the yub yubs are relly fanny
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