six-sentence story/ one upon a time

This week in writing we wrote a six sentence story about creating a character and adding deatail.Our focus was on creating sentences.We learnt that the four criteria of a sentence.

kindness

hay readers.Today in writing we did some learning about kindness it something that spreads through your body and heart.first we did a brain storm about what kindness is.Then we share our ideas to the teacher and she write our ideas on a big sheet of paper.Then we went on to a google doc and write a poem about what kindness is about.here is my kindness poem.

Writing lipogram exercise

Today in writing we used a picture prompt to create a lipogram is a sentence without using one particular letter.We had to write one interesting sentience describing the picture without using the letter i.what was challenging not able to use the letter i.

The dragon has forceful flames as hot as a oven.

A moment in time

                                                                       A moment in time


hi readers. today we finished our  story about a jet plane.we took picture prompt and pictured that we were on the wing of the plane. i enjoyed writing the story. what i found challenging was thinking of ideas.

      

I am on my diamond jet.I take a nape and i wake up on the wing off the jet.And i was terrified when i looked down i was high in the sky then i looked up and saw a beautiful sun set.The i took a nape and wook back up in the jet and i thought it was in real life.

The end by Noah

hockey practice

   hockey practice

today in we had peter from the Canterbury hockey he visited us in hockey we were learning about dribbling.when we were dribbling the ball it kept moving away from my stick.first we did dribbling we had imagine the ball was stuck to the stick  like glue.after that we learnt how to stop and dodge other people we had to control the ball at all times.lastly we played a game like rob the nest we had to run out to the sentere of the 4 hoops and get the ball out off the middle hoop then run back to your hoop and when all off the balls from the middle hoop then you steal the other balls out off the other teams hoop. then we went back to morning tea.

what i found hard was dibbling

what i found easy was the game

i learnt was dribbling