The lost flock

This is my lost flock writing with one of my friends. It was a little bit harder working with other people. We thought of ideas then put it into a story. We had to only talk to each other using comments. 

what i found easy was editing with buddy,what i found challenging was writing the story.

The Lost Flock

Intro




Once upon a high time? There was once a mysterious sheep, going onto a big

adventure through the bright blue sky. “There seems to be a rope attached to him” said the lost boy on the ground

But that didn't bother the sheep from his big adventure. He didn't know where he was going he just wanted to see the gigantic world, the sheep sighs in disappointment. The sheep thought he was lost and he didn't know where to go.

Then another sheep floats “for goodness sake!” said the annoyed sheep. “Why can I just be in peace!” he ferociously kick’s the sheeps ballon and the other sheep falls. “Ahh that's better” he sighed in relief.

Middle

Day and night pass, the sheep gets nowhere but, then a couple hours pass and then the sheep that fell down then floated back up again with another pair of balloons. “That’s it !” he said in anger. A plane was about to fly past so the `sheep pushed the other sheep into the plane. “NOW WILL YOU GO AWAY!? ” Bahh!” said the other sheep. But that didn't stop him.

Then suddenly, 5 other floating sheeps come with hundreds of balloons on them. The sheep sighed “well if you can't get them away you gotta take them with you” The sheep turns back and kicks all of the sheeps to tomorrow, and pops all of there balloons one by one at a time. Then he said in a calm voice “my time has come, my journey should end here goodbye.”And he falls gracefully to the ground without a sound.

End

The other sheeps had a funeral, but then PLOT TWIST the sheep awakens joring the funeral and kicks every other sheep in the funeral. Then he sese in a calm voice “my journey isn't over I will be back to finish my journey goodbye...goodbye...