I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Noah Cool Would You rather I like the way you writ a few reasons but you could probably write a bit more then this because I know you are a good writer. Next time you could add supporting details because there is not much reasons. But really good work!
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Hi Noah Cool Would You rather I like the way you writ a few reasons but you could probably write a bit more then this because I know you are a good writer. Next time you could add supporting details because there is not much reasons. But really good work!
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